All Comments on 'Shy Indian Wife Ch. 03'

fag cuck shit.

Keep writing..very interesting twist at the end

Typical TRASH

illiterate cuck shit.

Great story. Keep up the good work. You are showing the change in her personality so well. Don't stop.

Good content, but the writing needs a lot of improvement. I gave you a 5 for the content.

When can we expect new chapter, really amazing story and well described

Great story .. Keep writing ..

Don't get discouraged carry on you r writing goody story for subcontinent reader

really amazing story..i like to read the transformation of a traditional girl to a very ultra modern fashion loving slut..eagerly waiting for her new changes..and new adventures... hope u can write it well...make it as a big novel...

transformation of a traditional girl to a very hot slut

Fantastic writing...loved your work...please do continue

Dont pay attention to some cretins. They are known retarded people and will always say bad things about your writing

Please make Jyoti wear a low low saree showing her creamy belly and deep navel,atleast once

Or better still make her wear skimpy Indian blouses with strings at the back and extremely low navel saree,after they are back from honeymoon

Rated 5 stars

Dont hang up here. Just continue . . . Dont let her chicken out. Bring her back to the competition. It doesnt matter she wins or looses just let her live this new change.

Great story!

Continue the story.

Please continue. Would love to see Jyoti transform into sexy JOY and have sex with another man.

Just bring her back to competition. She wins or loses give her a modelling contract to wear malibu string bikini Slings even nude modelling. Dont hurry to introduce sex with other men. Slowly build the story first bikini modelling than nude modelling than nude-couple modelling, acting in commercials, softcore and at last you decide to introcude sex or not.

Ch. 3 is a masterpiece. Period.

When his wife was born it was written in the stars that many men would find her irresistibly sexy. It was also written that her husband would love her truly, madly, deeply. We now sense that his mad love has the potential to become kinky too. His "healthy" adoration of his wife's body slowly but durely paves the way for him to become a full-blown voyeur/cuck husband whose wife is permitted to be naughty at times as long as he knows she will come back to him.

great story....would love to read...jyoti having sex with another male....and more....

If Jyoti were my wife, i would think i died & went to heaven.

Jyoti has to get a job in a big company. Men would be hitting on her. Her girlfriends from work would tease her, like "Jyoti, this guy is after your body. He is HOT! If he was after my body, i would know what to do."

In the company of Western &/or Westernized women she would realize that a sexy woman can easily make more than one man happy. Also she would realize that a woman can cheat without ruining the marriage.

waiting to see the changes of jyothi and like to watch her training and grooming by angela and jessica...and like to see her as a high class nude model and a whore