All Comments on 'Shy Indian Wife Ch. 05'

A d keep your skeleton in it. If you decide to get an editor... hire 3

After so many months of not posting anything ,I thought you had given up on this story.good to see that you are still posting.But if this is how frequently you are going to be posting ,then I don't believe you could get far.I am in no way saying that your stories are bad,contrary to that this has one of the most genuine premise as of late.I wish you all the best.

Kindly consider uploading a bit more frequently (maybe once a month or so?)

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Good to see you back.

It's good to see you back finally.... kindly try to increase the frequency though

seem to be trying to normalise, looking like a slut for all woman. It is one thing to dress slutty at home for your husband but clearly another to dress slutty out and about. If woman want to be treated with respect they should dress respectfully when they are out. Most woman are very self conscious of their body most think there is something wrong with them so you seldom get a lot of skin showing at local street parties until you a more comfortable in others present. The extremes this man is pushing his wife is just stupid, men look every where for a respectful wife, who wants a slut for a wife? TK

Loved it

But hope we don't wait more 7 months

Go for second honeymoon in the same place. Let her participate in the same competition. This time let her win the competitions with modelling contract of same malibu string. Let her act in commercials like sports apparel, spa, condoms ad etc. (without nudity). Slowly introduce her to nude modelling than nude-couple modelling. Increase her acting in commercials and let her step in softcore (lesbian part should be very short, if introduced). Meanwhile DON'T portray as complete slut or whore, HER INNOCENCE IS THE STRENGTH of the story. During this whole development don't make her fuck any male other than yourself and don't stretch the part where you describe your sex with her. At last introduce sex with other male and it should be like she is confessing her cheating with guilt to you that how she couldn't control her feelings and she cheated.

No real man is a cuckold, wanting a whore wife who sleeps with other men is idiotic.

What exactly were you waiting for ?why such a huge gap between chapters?

Will you only upload after the chapter has reached 4 stars?

If that is so...it's really low.

Hi,love your work. I honestly hope that you will upload the next part as soon as possible.really don't want to wait 6 more months for it. That's a bit unreasonable.

Wanna read Jyoti groped by male model during shoot.

How did this get 4stars?

Guys look up an Indian amateur pornstar called Shilo, she is what I imagine Jyoti to look like

Come on . . . . continue the story . . . .

Did you stop writing this story?

The premises of this story was really good...if possible try to complete it.

it is amazing story..please continue...i like to read the make over..her day to day changes...makeups...dressing and everything in details....hope u can write it well..we r eagerly waiting for it

please write little fast..couldnt tolerate this waiting..

we r waiting to see the change from normal jyothi to the international bikini model..

want to see her slow change in dressing, makeups, hairstyle, body and every thing..

waiting to see she signing the contract with the Malibu Strings as a bikini model..

waiting to see her change in her sexual life too..

hope she will start dating, drinking smoking , stuffs etc etc...

in final stage she will become a celebrity..may be become a great porn actress..u will become her servant...

waiting to real all the developments... great story..hope u will continue it till the end....

Have read your story long time back , just visited again to check for next chapter , plz come back with a bang , all the best.

Please write the next chapter I am checking each month for it

Found this series by accident, hope you continue the series.

Amazing! Next Chapter Please! Cant Wait

Please continue to write @ClosetSkeleton, you have awesome ideas and fantasies

Capability of writing gone out of the window, what a sham and farce. In 5 years couldn't find ways to continue the plot.

Next part kab aayega.....waiting eagerly....

Next part bhi do .....

Are the new stories under a new name?

Hi brother I like please continue the stories completely

Please send me next part

Next part urgent