All Comments on 'Shy Indian Wife Opens Up Ch. 07'

by aurelius1982

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rashomanrashomanover 14 years ago
Good

Good job. I would love to read what happens next. Does she leaves him and become a slut or does he becomes a cuckload

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome story

Awesome story man....keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very Good...

Very good one.Please don't stop here. What is next??

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Another chapter please

Can you please write this chapter from bela's point of view, the other previous chapters from her point of view are great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
HOT AS HELL

You have make readers understand, what erotica really means. Can you please add another chapter where Bela tell her husband why she took the decision to let Riaz fuck her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
simply wow

Hi,

Hats off!!! I have been reading erotic stories for almost 10 years now. I have read stuff posted on several websites. But I have never read anything as titillating and as hot as this series ever before.

You know, I always wanted to read some good stuff with Indian backdrop. Many writers attempted it and some even did a good job and I am sure more stories with Indian background would be posted here in future. But they will have to think out of the box to reach anywhere closer to what you have created here.

Amazing idea, vivid description, every scene was completely Indian and impeccable language – this story had everything that an amazing story should have. It made me horny, completely. This five part series was a one sitting story, and I completed it in one go.

This story certainly deserves the best story award not only at literotica.com but at all erotic story websites.

Wish you all the best.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Amazing

please continue the story..Its really amzing, I am mesmerized...please add a chapter where Shyam f**k Bela...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

you seem to have a very good read of desi women

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

You're either a student of psychology or someone who has read stories written by one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Brilliant

You are an artist

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
un-fucking-believable

dude, this is a masterpiece...an absolute rollercoaster...I cannot thank you enough!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow..nice1

hey friend...gr8 story for sure.

But surely i didnt get the end........it was really abrupt and harsh......

Can u write one more chapter to elaborate as to why that happened in the end...............Thanks...........

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very Good

Very Good

sexyashrithsexyashrithover 13 years ago

Why dont u continue it..??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wonderful

i think this the most hot, nice , cool sex story i have ever read in my life.... actually i should say it is a novel..a made two character alive...a wonderful climax..please please keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Misleaded an interesting story-While it's read from beginning

I would have liked it even more if the story continued the way it has started. But in my point of view, the introduciton of Bela's childhood with her parents has totally disappointed me. if the story had been continued with the wife's exhibitionism & gone through sex with another man, a threesome & a gangbang, fucking outdoors and becoming a slut in a pattern, it would have been really great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

You write the best stories, please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Shy Hot Wife!

Great story which will encourage other husbands to come forward. The hot trend even in small indian towns nowadays is that numerous husbands are encouraging their hot wife's to have sex with another man while they watch. A man should be proud of his hot wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

awesome series. continue it further.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Will u let me fuck ur wife

Am fond of fucking married woman and u said she was hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
bestttttt..story ever heard or seen

I cmpltly travelled n felt the amount of lust in this story!!!!!..pleaseeeeee cntinue n write more chapters of it..uske baad kya hua..i want more chapters man..its was soooo damn awesome..!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
awesome bro

end line is killing it, fabulous job done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Fantabulous

Best story I have ever read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Should release a book with price tag in erotic section

I too a writer but don't want to reveal my name.. Seriously saying this.. I don't have a habit of reading big stories in a short time but this story from the beginning till end in 7th chapter made me to stick my eyes on the story and forget the world.. wow what a kind of emotion + kinky + erotic story.. truly a marvellous master piece work done by the author.. 200% confident that if this author think of publishing his works with a price tag under erotic collections.. it will rule the world for sure.. wow wow wow I am speechless especially the ending one line is enough to burst out cock.. classic yet erotic and kinkiest to the core.. ammmaaazzziinnngggg.. kisses to the author's hand for giving this creation.. please write more stories plssssssssssssssss

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Another pile of illiterate garbage by inept Paki ! "1*" !!

Not only it cheats on its ratings, but write its own favorable anon comments ! But that is normal for their breed. They ALL do it. God-damned lowlifes !

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Kickass

Dude you need to continue this. Fuck this was hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Love how this ends! Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Great story!!

Would love to read wife's perspective about the last part. Please write it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

best story i ever read. It would be great to read it what happens afterwords... an update aurelius? please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Baddest ending

A mixture of shock, coldness, confusion, arousal and all other emotions I can't even remember hit me at the end when she looked out the window, saw her husband and screamed 'HARDER!'

This writer is good as this is not just erotica but also passion, mystery and twist rolled up in one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What a story!

An amazing story, one of the best I've read! Leaves the reader on a cliffhanger! More on 'Bella & Gautam' please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
sizzling Hot

Please do continue with this series !!!!

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Like

Like Rashoman said way back in 09, this husband is a cuckload. This wife is whore, even in India.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Lust

What's next

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
The best ever story!

This is the best ever story by aurelius1982. Wish to see more similar stories.

Indian_Happy_CoupleIndian_Happy_Couplealmost 4 years ago
Never want this story to end

Episodes of Shyam and Bela are very erotic.

Really wish this story will keep on going.

(Even read other author HornyNRI version of Bela, as it dealt with Shyam and Bela)

Thanks for the story.

maxmaggmaxmaggover 3 years ago
Super

Really good

DecimaxDecimaxover 3 years ago
Very Erotic

Wonderful, I guess you have not shared Shayam episode with us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Erotic & hot

Please continue the story. Searching for these type of stories alot.

Please don't stop, give more updates

SweetNothingsAndBeyondSweetNothingsAndBeyondalmost 3 years ago

DEAR AURELIUS1982,

GREAT SERIES...

GREAT CONCEPT...

GREAT DESCRIPTION...

GREAT BUILT UP...

GREAT CULMINATION...

EACH CHAPTER BETTERED THE LAST ONE...

"YEH DIL MAANGE MORE!!!"

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Nothings wouldn't recognize a good story if it bit him on the ass. This proves it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Super sexy

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

A lovely story. But it should have continued for a few more chapters exploring her desired and further degradation into the world of extreme lust

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