All Comments on 'Sibling Sex Ch. 02'

Please keep it going.

Great story, but one thing... The way you changed perspective, brother or sister nararating, without warning was very confusing, esp. the first time.

Great Story. I loved the character development and romance. But, I have to agree with the other comment that you maintain either Bob or Sara's point of view. Do not jump back and forth as you did here. It is a wonderful series you have started and I look forward to the next chapter.

hope you will continue this story. however it might be more enjoyable for your readers if when you switch POV you made it clearer by starting new paragragh. I personally enjoy the varied viewpoint style but prefer a better deliniation.

Hey Anon (boring) you're a idiot. Stay off this site if u can't appreciate the time and effort the writer puts into their work.

Where do they go from here? Love to know if they stay together and make some babies after he has his V reversed.

How can you write this changlng from the male version of the story to the female within the space of a few words this made a complete farce ..Please rewrite using one person to tell story

Great story, ok what is next. I hope the author won't abandon this story.

Good story, but pov changes without any kind of transition made this chapter difficult to read.