All Comments on 'Sibling Survival Ch. 01'

He did NOT SEEN anything. He SAW it. He did not Done this, he did this. Ugghhh please.

Their are some missed spelled words and bad writing but I did like most of the story. You need to address more of the surrounding story of why they are alone.

Love it, look forward to more of these two! :P

Jesus! Did anyone else just get a flashback to high school English?? Haha! Seriously though, I’ll try harder next time with spelling ect. I find it quite hard to proof read my own work. I’m delighted some people have enjoyed it and if you didn’t.. That’s unfortunate. As always, I appreciate all feedback and will take all your comments and suggestions on board. DFM

Looking forward to the next chapter. You should have found a good editor/proof reader by then....

A pretty good start. The characters feel like actual brother sister and the tension between them is also built up well.

I'm now looking forward to see what the apocalypse is about, how it started and how did the characters adapted to it. Don't fill the next few chapters with complete sex related stuff. I think this story could be really good if you focused more on the apocalypse stuff and how the characters survive in this new found situation that they're in and sex stuff should blend in with really good with that since the characters already broke that taboo barrier.

Great work nonetheless. 5 stars.

That’s the BEST sex story I’ve EVER read!!!! Please Post the next chapter soon... I’m dying to know what happens

VERY GOOD!! please continue writing in general, as you obviously have talent. But PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue THIS story if nothing else!!!

Will there be any more?

This is great!

I love this story its pretty powerful sexual tensions were spot on. I know I was that way with my older sister at a time in my life that I felt very alone she came to my rescue. Wee spent on incredible summer in 77 just expiring each other. I was the most magical time of my life. I have always been close to my sister that one summer we got really close.

great start please continue

Would be a shame if you didn't continue this, it's got massive potential. Haven't ever come across erotic fiction set in a post-apocalyptic setting, it's honestly a nice change