by True_Motherfucker
Great start to a series with Brad and his sister and maybe mom too but please don't bring outsiders in andd ruin the taboo story. Brad needs to fill his sister with cum repeatedly
I'm sorry. If he had an 8 year enlistment how was he out in 4? That was enough to pull the plug. 2*
You asked for ideas. Lucy seeks Katy out, explains what was going on, makes a pass
.. leading to 3some
... you can build up a head of steam from there.
Lucy sucking the candy cane covered with her anal juices on it was a definite turn-off for me. Otherwise, not a bad story. 2 out of 5.
5 stars. The waitress needs to have a part of the upcoming chapters. Maybe mom after that ?
You need an editor, so many sentences that make no sence, the way they are written
licking her own anal slime? fucking gross, dude. Seriously. What is it with brits?
Good story with slow build up & getting paid 200 Quid for bar duty & shame Katie the blonde waitress walked away hating Brad's incestuous attraction to LUCY !!
A threesome with LUCY, & Katie's blonde pussy to begin a threesome is a must A MUST event ASAP !!
You had a really good, hot, sexy story right up until:
"She reached up and took the piece of candy from his hands. Lucy kept eye contact with him and slipped the candy cane between her lips. "Cum on me," she demanded, sucking her anal juices."
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Totally disgusting and filthy. I felt like I was going to puke my guts out. You get a 2/5 and you're lucky that I didn't drop it to a one!
you see all these people telling you to add mom in it, please fucking dont.
i will say that the anal juices licking was absolutely disgusting, quite a turnoff still an amazing story.
dont ruin it and add mom, i hate mom incest. you can add it but i wont be reading.
4.5/5