All Comments on 'Siblings Drank Too Much'

Good premise.

Story just so so.

Needed more in the way of preliminaries/foreplay/use of hands on each other. All with many details.

And adding the mother to the mix adds absolutely nothing.

Three stars. Could have been 4 or 5.

awesome

The fact that English cannot be your first language is no excuse for intentionally publishing in it. You write very badly, and really should stop.

Love reluctance. Love the gradual ratcheting up until sis gives in while still verbally commenting over and over that it’s incest, she is fucking her brother, mom saw it and it’s wrong. So fucking hot. Part 2 please!

Had a decent beginning until it was no longer consensual but nearly became rape. I lost 10000% interest in it at that point.

Garbage rape fantasy

I was enjoying this up until it became rapey.

Pure shit! From the obvious fact, that you're Indian or some other backward ass spoken retarded to the clear failure to know that NO means NO, and drunk in any culture is still rape. PART TWO. shit no, destroy the first part and save the rape fantasy for whatever sess pool in which you dwell.

def should be in the non consensual section first and foremost but i just skipped over that part and it was great minus that part

Many siblings close in age have helped each other out without going all the. There are many ways for stress relief of both.

I loved this story! The tension from the start was great, undressing under the blankets! I enjoyed how he kept humping her and wouldn't let her go, it was so erotic for me and I'm a girl! You could tell she was into it and didn't truly want to escape, which makes it so hot! Mom catching them in the act of fucking but them just carrying on fucking harder and harder was soooo hot!! And how she kept saying "you're my brother, this is wrong" and he just kept fucking her harder!! So sexy!! I liked how he spread her and kept inhaling her cunt! Lovely story 5/5 

where's part two

Ppl so damn butt hurt about the repeated no's. The fact is that both of them are drunk. Both of them made poor choices. Get over it.

People say this all the time but I RARELY do..

This needs a sequel

Have to agree with Sargedog. Unfortunately, it was like a literary train wreck. I kept reading hoping the sis was finally going to get into it, but she never did. Kept telling her dumbass drunk brother no…repeatedly. Bad enough, he raped a girl, but his sister!? WTF!! Would’ve given this a negative rating if allowed. As Sargedog eloquently stated…pure shit!