All Comments on 'Sibling's Story Pt. 01'

Hot start and eas to read too. Well done from me for your first story. Love to read more soon please.

I too have enjoyed this as it is so real for me .

I too did it with my brother at home . Enjoyed it all.

Really liked the start of this story. It's kinda how I imagine a brother and sister's romantic relationship would develop, slowly and with uncertainty. This initial chapter maybe could have been longer. Just thinking given the uncertainty the siblings show about their embryonic relationship whether they would have gone straight to having sex.

Anyway, looking forward to reading the next installment.

A good first story. Please continue and thanks for your time and imagination.

You are off to a great start! Looking forward to more from you.

Great beginning. Keep it up.

I enjoyed it favourited you don't want to miss pt.o2

Ok, just a little not much on parental units - no dad only mom mentioned...

Please carry on and build this story, perhaps add a little more intrigue, perhaps guilt or apprehension or soul searching?

Overall a great beginning,

I usually don't like stories this short, but yours was an exception. It's a shame that there isn't more. Unless there is more and you didn't link it together.

Full of promise but not follow through, otherwise a very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.