by lovecraft68
Two words "The Internet". Very realistic touch! I like the progression of Megan's thoughts as she considers her and Mark's future. The idea that they could be exposed by something as simple as a "Tmz" like story is a great twist. makes it seem as if she's not just contemplating her and Mark being a couple but about possibly becoming public at some point. Although I'm sure some people are getting impatient, I am still loving the details. To many stories have the "And me and sis moved in together and got married and..." In the last two chapters Megan is considering everything and I like how she said that she would tell her parents if she decided to be with her brother. I also like the touch of her admitting that in her profession and the type of people who by her work that it would up her popularity. All in all excellent and even though these chapters are not individually significant I can feel something building up. Can't wait to finally discover what Doug has against Mark
Brilliant chapter as usual! While I'm dying to know the issue between Mark and Doug the build up makes it all the more worthwhile. I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
these characters as they grow and learn about life and each other and living to be who they really are. I never get enough of this story! And OMG Wow, doug finally accepting Mark as his son.. more more more!
thought chap 24 ended with incredible sweetness, this takes it to the summit.
Beautiful honesty and ownership from Doug, letting Mark know he is truly appreciated. Bizarrely twisted given what Doug doesn't know. SICK PUPPY! love it.
Diamonds maybe for ever but emotions aren't . I can't help feeling there is something else playing in the background as far as Doug's concerned.
This was a little hard to follow, but ended on a good note with a reconciliation between Mark and Doug. Would be nice for Deniece to gain knowledge of the reason for the earlier separation. I’m looking forward to reading more of this saga to see how Megan turns her life around.