All Comments on 'Siblings with Benefits Lex Talionis Ch. 05'

Violence, what a rush for Mark. I am waiting to see how he gets out of this. He can't hide in his room can he?

This story is fucking phenomenal! I approached this chapter apprehensively knowing what was to come and I was surprised to find myself devouring your words voraciously.

As for living up to expectations, please.... you fucked the shit out of it AND left it begging for more!

you have my deepest admiration for your writing skill and the way you can spin this story and the entire series! I cant ever get enough of Mark and Megan in any form!! Superb!

Great story , mind blowing writing bt I gta say my dark side aent to happy with mark slipping n telling meg n mainly nt killing max , tbh I would of killed max even if I didn't ave voice lol

It been over a hour since finished read this chapter,,, I'm still an emotional wreck,,, very very powerful,,some of the best writing I have ever read,,,,from beginning to end,,,the sweet time with Cyn to phone call from Megan to the voice to the dog everything was prefect,,,just knowing that Megan would get there,,, found myself saying "come on Megan" with ever lull in the fight,,,,,can't wait for chapter 6

If I could, I would reach out and shake your hand, pull you in for a hug, and say thank you.

These stories are life changing to say the least. I never felt such emotion from reading anything as I do when I'm reading SwB. Please for the love of god, give us more. I cant find the words describe my feelings.

Just give us more. quickly. give us more. I cant fight the urge to be patient anymore.

By far the best storyline in Literotica.

The fight scene is a very nice way of bringing out the neurotic condition that afflicted Mark. You also brought in the usual reluctance of schizophrenia patients to handle their medication. You have depicted the notion, that Mark is really broken in more ways than one, over this series. A tough task well done.

Wanted more violence. Also, was it after attacking max in the other series that mark says "I wonder if they will put me in fathers room"? That was a great quote and id have liked to see it. But as you pointed out, I felt like the voice and I was yelling at the webpage for max to get what was coming to him. Lol. Loved it so much >:D

i don't mean to sound all sorts of snippy, but what happened to chapter six of Alex Talionis?

Just finished this chapter and before moving back to the main story (part 3) need to find part 6 the Aftermath. Was it ever posted? Thanks! Love your writing and the series.

I have really gotten into this series and was wondering where ch 6 might be found?

Thank you

Where is the next chapter? I love this story but can't find the next chapter.

the imagery of Mark's illness comes to life vividly and with perfection would love to see this as well as the entire SWB novel as a Anime movie. the shadow, the Dog, the attic. everything made sense and flowed effortlessly. You are a true Author talent match Dean Koontz, W.E.B. Griffin. without being over done like John Grisham. The SWB series is the first of yours I've read, but i will be reading all your works, your have found a true fan in me.

Thanks and keep up great work.

Kevin

Wow....

Thank you for this wonderful series 5stars gpa

What an intense story! Just so very well written! Right through every Chapter of SWB> I just couldn't put it down!! It's 4:00 AM & I've got to catch a plane at 7:15 but I couldn't stop reading! I'm actually disappointed not knowing the rest of this story! Please, don't make us wait too long!!

Thirteen years and the story is still not complete. Just like SWB, you have left your readers without the ending. I dislike Mark’s intention to finish Max, and was glad Megan helped to end it as I thought she would at the end of the last chapter. The early part of the chapter was great, but the murder intention was sick as Mark is much of the time. Hurray for Megan that she stayed clean and attempted to stop Mark.