All Comments on 'Side Job'

wow, could be a great story but its very poorly written.

NEEDS A LOT MORE

the story is ok, the writing isn't.

Mmm, wish that was me, or Steve.

Never comment on these but I so hope there’s a part 2

I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

The writing would be greatly improved if you used better grammar, at the very least use speech marks. For example I think the last paragraph would be much better if it was written like this:

Once I was dressed Terry walked me to the door.

"Let me know if you want to work another party, sissy," he said with a giggle.

"You never know, I just might," I replied, winking as I walked away.

extremely poor grammar. never heard of Grammarly?