All Comments on 'Sideshow Sylvie'

Good story, but the ending was shit

a bloody good tale .

exceedingly well written

well worthy of 5 stars.

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however ... the story does beg the question seeing as it's written in the 1st person pov / perspective .... how does our intrepid protagonist live to write tell the tale

That was creepy. Very well done. Bonus points for correct use of French! Excellent story.

Pretty damned good.

i've always got the biggest hard on for undead girl, like the ghost in the grudge movie, the ring...etc and this story fulfilled all that, thank you

Very nice. You pushed the story right to the edge of what could be accepted, given the topic. My only suggestion would have been for him to not show him Sylvie at the first meeting. Have him giving him little bits of horror almost like candy. Drawing him in deeper and deeper . Have him go home and write. it's the best he ever did.By Far better than anything he's done before.

He goes back. A bit more, then a bit more. after about the six or seventh trip he tells him that he has something extra special.

But that he will only show him if the writer can keep a secret.

I would have like to have seen it dawn out a bit more than him suddenly showing a guy who is a friend of a friend.

Hot Zombie chicks in the freezer, got to love it.

M.S.Tarot

Wow, this story blended horror with the erotic too perfectly. It was an absolute pleasure to read. Bravo.