by raginrhinoman
Time to just tell John the truth and get out of the marriage and back to the life for which she was destined. The way you wrote this, she has no other option. And please don;t go on that her husband will forgive and forget. He can't. You are quite right when you say that if ever came out the resulting publicity would end John's career.
You wrote her in the corner and really there is no way out. This is just one of the sad things about the porn business...you are generally fucked for any other kind of life.
Unless Paul magically dies, of course but then she still has hubby and the memories of all the times she dishonored him.
is the better you produce...the more you get fucked. TK U MLJ LV NV
A big XXX-Star and she didn't know any badass men to kill that bastard? He was trapped in the bathroom and she didn't took any action, as burn the house down with the movie going in ashes too? Or burn the three of them? For a Porn Star she was naive...Let's see the ending...2* for this part...
2000 years ago a former prostitute showed she could change and be respected. Hubby year is a minister, and should be full of forgiveness. On the other hand, the blackmailer is scum.
So except for the author, who didn't know that the wife was going to get fucked over? She should have just met him the first time in some remote location and killed him. Instead you are killing us with this unbelievable tale. Don't worry about the ending, its already over.
This wasn't anything more than an excuse for a gangbang scene .
raginrhinoman you get 2*s . This 6 page story is dragging out . Five chapters are you kidding !!
I presume this is the first story you have ever posted . I'll be hoping you get better with the next one . Your idea wasn't new ,but it wasn't bad if you could have executed it much better .
Good luck
AMerryMan
....she'd have been better off to use some of her money to pay someone to 'Help' Paul see the error of his ways, and recover the proof he was using to blackmail her.
Not murder for hire, you see....just some muscle to educate the perp.
Really, these stories with the "inescapable victimization" are legion (especially with the cuck-story crowd), and mostly bullshit.
If a man brings a knife to a fight, you bring a gun, etc. etc. Maneuvering past a blackmailer to gain the upper hand is not so hard as many might think...and the results are far more satisfying than crap like this.
Conclusion: She's doing it because she wants to, not because she's a victim of some geek.
I think, she'll end up leaving hubby for the fast life again, deciding after awhile that she enjoys it all too much to live the straight life she's been in.
No reality in any of it, but then, you brought us here, didn't you?
A few surprises coming in the finale'
Stay tuned :)
It will take a totally original idea to save this tale. I know, I've read thousands. Here's your big chance to shine, author. I'll rate the entire series at the end.
I've got my fingers crossed.
Coercion and violence against women. Can't wait to see what happens. Good story on nasty subject
You lost the story completely. You shitheads always bring in another black dildo in these scrappy stories.