All Comments on 'Sighs'

I won't remember this as one of my favorites of all time, but all in all I think it was a pretty solid story. There were a couple spelling and grammar issues, nothing major (you said tutor, pretty sure you meant Tudor, that sort of thing). You seemed to stumble over your words in some places. There are a couple places where I thought the pacing was off, not the pace of the narrative, the pace of the language. In some places I don't think the feel of the language you used was as frenetic as what you were describing. You should definitely keep writing. You seem to have a style of your own that I imagine would only improve the more you write. I particularly liked the way you described the music which is something I don't think a lot of people are able to do well.