All Comments on 'Sight Unseen'

This author is bucking a trend that was becoming popular with some of the cool kids of Literotica. Not only yeet free, but also sporting a "no yeets" tag!

Whatever works to balance out those pesky yeet infections...

Brilliant story. You have a wonderfully creative mind and you put it to good use. Thanks for sharing your talents. 5*, of course.

Nice work. I enjoyed it, even without the yeets. I just wish there could be a balance. Maybe not the big yeets, but the ones that are important.

Thanks for the story.

Cog

I enjoyed your story. Well written and I kept wondering what would happen next. It would have done well in the Sci-Fi section also. Thanks for sharing. High marks!

YAWN, why can't you writers ever write a story without the word 'cunt'?

Excellent as always. 5*

Yeet! Excellent story, Mr. Cool Kid.

Felt sorry for Deborah, she was a bitch, but still hope that she will turn her life around now that she knows where it's leading.

It's not like the future can't be changed, Cassie showed that multiple times.

Wonderful, unpretentious little story!

5

I really enjoyed the pacing, the timing just mysterious enough to keep me wondering until it "unspooled" :)

Nice to read something different for a change.

very short...

Loved it for 5 stars and a Thank You!

Every time I read or re-read one of your stories, I'm taken to an unexpected places.

You describe things so clearly and simply

It's scary and yet rings of truth.

Thank you for writing.

Your prose makes my life richer.

Liked this liked it a lot

Well written and paced with strong beginning middle and end

Thank you

An utter waste of time. 1*

Interesting premise, but a shell of a story.

WOW