All Comments on 'Sigma Lambda Tau: Boss Bitch'

Great story and concept well executed.

Roseyfingers,

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

This story was commissioned by an anonymous patron through a generous donation to a sexual assault prevention charity.

Fantastic story

It's always a good day when there's a BumperCars release - this one has some of your best character work to the point that I could understand why Avery would go thru with the challenge at the end, consequences and all. You're getting better all the time, and I'm starting to find your releases frequently trigger one of my own.

Now, about that drunk girl with the unpronounceable safe word.... think there's a story there?

Anon,

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Anon,

I'm glad you're a fan of my work. I have enjoyed developing my writing here, and I'm glad that my stories lead to further ideas and stories.

There are a few story hooks in here, and I might write more about Sigma Lambda Tau once I've finished the two series that I have in progress right now (Class Project and Lost Worlds). I'd also be open to this sorority being something of a shared universe, if other folks want to write stories about them.

By far the best bumpercars story I've had the pleasure to read. I hope we'll see much more of Sigma Lambda Tau!

Anon,

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I might write more about SLT in the future - it's certainly a universe with more possibilities. I'm trying to finish up a couple of other series first, though.

Really well done again! It's not just the writing, but the way you present the characters that make your stories so enjoyable. Their personalities matter and flow into the story. It feels very subtle and elegant.

(Still waiting for a novel by you :D )

Anon,

I'm glad you liked the story and the way the characters work. If I publish a novel, I'll try to let you know. :)

You should definitely do a shared universe type situation here. This is my favorite of your stories.

History_Prof,

I do plan to write more stories about Sigma Lambda Tau, but I'm trying to complete the Lost Worlds series first.

Do you plan to write any storys that focus on Avery's and Hannah's relationship? While this story was super hot I really want to see a story in the future where perhaps the two settle down together? I'm just a sucker for people who give out pleasure but never get true pleasure. And seeing Hannah finally getting what she needs is so wholesome yet sexy. The twos chemistry is great and Im hungry for more.

Anon,

That's an interesting thought. Avery and Hannah did end up being more affectionate and caring than I might have guessed when I began writing. I don't know for certain if I'll write more stories that focus on them, but I'll consider it. If I write more stories involving Sigma Lambda Tau, I'll also try to weave in characters from prior SLT stories.

I would love to see more of Hannah and Avery, maybe even have them become a thing and raise the baby together. As seniors, they could graduate still and get that mommy vibe going on.

Anon,

I don't know what's in store for those two, but I'll think about it. They might be present in other SLT stories if I write more.

No explanation given why girls would do this, but that's a heck of a lot better than a half-assed explanation. With no explanation, I could just sit back and sort of enjoy the ride.

Anon,

Yeah, that's about my attitude towards realism in smut. I like my stories to be a bit fanciful, and I'm glad that other folks like them that way too.

Absolutely need to read more about Avery and Hannah during her pregnancy and after her pregnancy.

Great job 5 stars

Anon,

We'll have to see if those two volunteer for more stories. Perhaps they'll show up in other SLT stories even if they aren't the central characters.

Ya got mad skills. Well-written and imaginative,

Anon,

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Damn that was hot. Does Avery get to stay in the frat after getting knocked up will we get to see pregnant Avery in any future story's ?

5⭐

IsabellaMarie,

Yeah, Avery gets to stay in. Pledges who get pregnant aren't admitted, but Avery's already a Sigma.

I do think it would be fun to involve past characters in future Sigma Lambda Tau stories, and I think I'll weave some of them in in the future.

IsabellaMarie,

Also, thank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I read this story and Guess Who and the win the prize or get pregnant format for these two story's is hot AF looks like Hannah is going to make a great boss and by the sounds of it Avery has an exciting 9 months ahead of her a baby on the way and I'm guessing a journey of sexual discovery with some more Hannah approved partners.

P.S I don't know if you plan to reuse any of your characters in future story's but for some reason I would love to read a sex scene with a heavily pregnant Avery.

5S

SofiaKreouzi,

I'm glad you're enjoying the series!

I have been thinking about bringing characters from previous SLT stories back in. I don't know to what degree they'll appear, but I like the idea of weaving the stories together.

Thanks for reading!

Nicely written and a fantastically absurd setting seems like a hell of a way for Avery to find out she's a bottom.

Thanks for putting in the time to write this for us.

Anon,

You are welcome, and thank you for reading! Yeah, I happily embrace a certain amount of absurdity in these stories, and I'm glad other folks enjoy that too.

Just read this one. Guess I'm the slow student.

For a little bit there -- when Hannah got really confident of her win, began dominating Avery but also /taking/care/ of Avery -- I thought she was gonna flip the script... she & Avery & Forfeit were gonna go knock-up /Maya/ ! ;-)

Anon,

Hey, no worries. I'm glad you liked it.

You raise an interesting idea - what would happen if one of the contenders got the previous Boss Bitch pregnant? My guess is that she'd end up running SLT at the national level at least.

Wow, fantastic story. I'm glad that Hannah won as I thought that Avery was just a bit to smug. I have a feeling that Avery is going to be Hannah's bitch, but Hannah will take good care of her and her baby.

Anon,

Thanks! Yeah, I think most folks were rooting for Hannah to win the contest. I agree that that Hannah will take care of Avery and the baby, too - that's why she's the boss.

Great story. Realizing your actually a bottom while in the middle of contest that will decide if your in charge or about to contribute to reversing the drop in birth rates must have been a hell of a revelation for Avery.

5/5

Anon,

Yeah, I think this was quite a surprise for Avery, but I think it'll work out well for her.

Thanks for reading!

Some girls have happily avoided pregnancy at Sigma Lambda Tau. Maybe we should hold a tournament and find out who is the best?

Anon,

I've thought about bringing some of the SLT characters back, which could include some of them competing for leadership positions against each other. It depends on whether a story idea really strikes me, though.