All Comments on 'Silver Ch. 02'

This was a great follow up, it had everything, action, love and great sex. There definitely needs to be a third chapter.

I wish I could give it more of a 100. I was so worried that something had happened to Theophilus that I was crying. I was crying at the end to know that they could all have wonderful children. You really need to write about that. I hope this story keeps going. I keep an eye out to see if you post anything about the Silver group and anything else. I think your writting is wonderful. Keep up the good work and don't keep us waiting too long for a new story. Thanks for writting. I can't wait to see more. I love all of your stories. Your charaters are always so real that they make you fall in love with them.

I love this story . Please continue with the series.

I do not normally enjoy same sex storys, but this one ... i just loved. Your characters came alive in a way tat is rearly seen. I sincerely hope that you will continue with storys about that lads from Silver.

wow!! this is one future i m looking forward! You have amazing skill in story-telling that could even make a professional blush. Thank u!!

- Ardent Fan

This is another story that I can (and have) re-read over and over again. It's just so sexy and sweet (with a perfect hint of melancholy and drama)! Too much fantasticness in one story ;p So well written too, I just adore a story that seems to flow freely and endlessly, and this does just that. Great work !

"XAVIER ! AWAKEN !" "YES, MY GODDESS ?" SAID XAVIER. "YOU AND YOUR BROTHERS OF THE HEART AND THEIR MATES HAVE PROVEN, OVER AND OVER AGAIN HOW STRONG AND ENDURING YOUR LOVE FOR EACH OTHER IS. THROUGH THE MANY TRIALS AND TESTS THAT YOU HAVE OVERCOME. I HAVE BEEN WATCHING YOU AND YOURS TO SEE IF YOU ARE WORTHY OF MY GIFT. I HAVE WANTED FOR SO LONG TO BESTOW A BOON TO SOMEONE WORTHY. AND I HAVE CHOSEN YOU AND YOUR BROTHERS AND YOUR MATES TO RECEIVE THIS MY GREATEST GIFT." SAID THE GODDESS. "MY GODDESS ! I AM MOST GRACIOUS AND APPRECIATIVE THAT YOU HAVE FOUND US WORTHY OF THIS HONOR YOU WANT TO BESTOW UPON US." SAID XAVIER, "MAY I ASK, MY GODDESS. WHAT THE GIFT IS ?" "YES, MY CHILD, YOU MAY." SAID THE GODDESS. "I AM GIFTING YOU AND YOUR BROTHERS WITH THE ABILITY FOR YOU TO IMPREGNATE YOUR MATES AND FOR YOUR MATES TO CARRY THEIR YOUNG IN A WOMB THAT I AM GOING TO CREATE IN THEM." "MY GODDESS ! HOW CAN THIS BE POSSIBLE ?" SAID XAVIER. "IT"S SIMPLE, MY CHILD." SAID THE GODDESS. "ALL OF YOU WILL COME TO OUR PLANET AND THEN TO MY TEMPLE WHERE YOU AND YOUR MATES WILL ENTER THE TEMPLE AND BE WELCOMED AND BE SHOWN INTO THE INNER SANCTUM WHERE NO ONE IS ALLOWED TO ENTER AS YOU WELL KNOW." "YES, MY GODDESS." SAID XAVIER. "I REMEMBER THIS WELL FOR WHEN I TRIED TO ENTER AS A BOY AND GOT SEVERELY SCOLDED BY THOSE SAME ACOLYTES OF YOURS. WHO APOLOGIZED FOR MAKING ME CRY AND GAVE ME A TREAT TO STOP MY TEARS." SAID XAVIER. "HA ! HA! YES. I REMEMBER THAT DAY WELL. YOU WERE ALWAYS A SCAMP WEREN'T YOU AND STILL ARE IN SOME WAYS AREN'T YOU, MY CHILD." SAID THE GODDESS. THE GODDESS STARTED LAUGHING SOFTLY, TO NOT AWAKEN THEOPHILUS FROM HIS SLUMBER WHO WAS LYING NEXT TO HIS MATE AND SLEEPING SOUNDLY, AFTER SEEING XAVIER BLUSHING SO HOTLY FROM HER TEASING OF HIM. "BUT WE DIGRESS FROM THE PURPOSE OF MY VISITATION TO YOU THIS NIGHT." SAID THE GODDESS. " AFTER YOU ARE SHOWN INTO THE INNER SANCTUM OF MY TEMPLE. YOU WILL EACH THEN GO THROUGH A RITUAL OF PURIFICATION FOR EACH COUPLE TO DO TOGETHER. AS EACH COUPLE MUST BE CLEANSED AND THEIR SOULS HARMONIZED FOR MY GIFTS TO BE TRANSFERRED INTO EACH OF YOU.." "AFTER YOUR PURIFICATION IS COMPLETE YOU WILL THEN BE PLACED AS A COUPLE OF EACH PAIRING ONTO MY ALTAR BY MY ACOLYTES . WHERE A WHITE LIGHT WILL ENGULF YOU TO MEASURE YOUR TRUE WORTHINESS TO RECEIVE MY GREATEST TREASURE." WHILE THE WHITE LIGHT IS ON YOU. YOU WILL EACH BE ASKED ARE YOU READY TO BECOME PARENTS AND YOUR MATES WILL BE ASKED IF THEY ARE READY TO RECEIVE THEIR WOMB AND OVUM WITH THEIR DNA TO BE PLACED IN THEIR BODIES. FOR YOUR SPERM TO THEN BE ABLE TO IMPREGNATE THEM. FOR THEM TO NURTURE AND THEN GIVE BIRTH TO YOUR YOUNG. THEY WILL ALSO BE ASKED IF THEY ARE WILLING TO ACCEPT THE PAIN OF THE BIRTHING PROCESS. AS EACH BIRTH WILL HAVE TO EITHER BE DONE ANALLY IN A NATURAL BIRTH OR BY A C-SECTION DELIVERY. WHICH YOU AS COUPLES CAN DISCUSS AND CHOOSE LATER ON." SAID THE GODDESS. "MY GODDESS !' BREATHED XAVIER IN AWE. "YOU ARE TRULY GIVING EACH OF US A GIFT THAT IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL AND HEART WARMING THING YOU WILL ALLOW EACH OF AS COUPLES TO DO TO EXPRESS OUR GREATEST LOVE TO OUR MATES. AND MY BROTHERS OF THE HEART WILL BE MOST GRATEFUL AND HONORED TO BE BESTOWED THIS GRACIOUS GIFT AT THE SAME TIME AS MY MATE AND I." SAID XAVIER. AS HE GOT UP OFF THE NEST OF PILLOWS OF HE AND HIS MATE. TO KNEEL BEFORE HIS GODDESS TO GRAB HER HAND TO KISS IT IN MOST HUMBLE THANKFULNESS AND GRATITUDE AS TEARS OF JOY RAN DOWN HIS FACE. "ARE YOU SURE YOUR BROTHERS AND THEIR MATES WILL LIKE MY GIFT TO THEM ?" ASKED THE GODDESS. "AS THEY ARE NOT FROM OUR PLANET. I DID NOT TRULY KNOW IF THEY WOULD BE WANTING TO BE PARENTS OR NOT. BUT AS I WAS GIFTING YOU AND YOUR MATE WITH THE ABILITY. IT SEEMED UNFAIR OF ME TO HAVE THEM WATCH AS YOUR MATES BELLY EXPANDED WITH YOUR CHILD AND NOT BE ABLE TO HAVE A CHILD OR CHILDREN OF THEIR OWN." 'THOUGH I KNOW THEY WOULD NOT BEGRUDGE YOU THE JOY OF BECOMING PARENTS. AS THEY TOO WOULD BE THEIR FATHERS ALSO BECAUSE OF YOUR CLOSE BONDS.' SAID THE GODDESS. "OH, MY GODDESS! NEVER DOUBT THE THANKFULNESS THEY WILL HAVE TO YOU." SAID XAVIER. "I WOULDN'T EVEN BE SURPRISED IF THE ASKED YOU TO BE GODMOTHER TO THEIR OFFSPRING. I KNOW ME AND MY MATE WILL BE MOST APPRECIATIVE IF YOU WOULD BE TO OURS.." THIS PLEASED THE GODDESS VERY MUCH AND CAUSED HER TO GLOW WITH HAPPINESS AT HIS OFFER. "THIS WILL PLEASE ME GREATLY AND I WILL MOST HUMBLY ACCEPT, THANK YOU." SAID THE GODDESS. "NO, MY GODDESS. THANK YOU !" SAID XAVIER. "IN A FORTNIGHT YOU WILL BE SUMMONED TO OUR PLANET WHERE YOU WILL PRESENT YOURSELF AT MY TEMPLE FOR MY GIFT TO BE BESTOWED TO YOU ALL" SAID THE GODDESS AS SHE FADED FROM SIGHT. AS XAVIER CONTINUED TO KNEEL WHERE HE WAS HE TOOK A DEEP CALMING BREATH AND WITH HIS HEART FULL OF GRATEFULNESS HE WOKE THEOPHILUS TO HELP HIM TO AWAKEN THE REST OF THEIR FAMILY TO GIVE THEM ALL THE GOOD NEWS AT THE SAME TIME. ~~~~~~ **** UMMM !!!!! I THOUGHT THIS MIGHT GIVE YOU AN IDEA FOR A NEW CHAPTER OR THE START OF A NEW SERIES FOR THIS STORY WHERE THEY RETIRE FROM THE FORCE TO RAISE THEIR YOUNG CLOSE TO PAPA JAMESON AND HIS WIFE SO THEY CAN DOTE ON THEIR GRAND CHILDREN. YOU COULD HAVE THE FAMILY START A SPECIALIZED TRAINING FACILITY WHERE THEY TRAIN THE NEW RECRUITS FOR THE FORCE IN THEIR INDIVIDUAL SUBJECTS OR SOMETHING. THIS STORY IS REALLY GOOD AND I HOPE THIS GIVES YOU AN IDEA FOR A SEQUEL SERIES TO BE WROTE. AS I REALLY DON'T WANT IT TO END. THANK YOU !!!!!!!!

I'm rereading this story again and again. Pelaam is such an amazing author! <3