by Payne_Hall
love love LOVE, this may be my new favorite Sulfur story. I can’t wait for part 2!
In-fucking-credible!!!! As always, your story doesn't disappoint!! It made me cum over and over again!! I can't wait for Part 2!!!
Oh, wow..... Never before has pain, real warm, aching pain, felt more desirable!
Thank you so much for yet another classic to my nighttime collection.
I’ve already read this over 3 times & it hasn’t even been up a full day! So hot and incredibly written!
Heady. Another dark, twisted, lovely story. I enjoy what you do so much. Thank you.
Wonderful. I often find longer stories difficult to read and finish but I had a hard time putting this one down at all. I'll be keeping an eye out for the second part when it comes out.
You write what it's like to crave and take pain so beautifully!! It is so sensually done. It feels so real.
As someone with a pain fetish, I also feel so seen and understood when it's not something often accepted.
Your writing is also just so incredibly well done. You are by far my favorite author on here. Thank you for all your hard work!! <3 <3
I've just started getting into your stories. Interesting style -- long, slow development with a lot of emphasis on character. I like the way you switch the narrator back and forthj so you can get into both of their heads. You make the reader wait for the erotica, but it's worth the wait. I don't generally cultivate S&M as a genre, but you do it so well that you make me enjoy it. I'll be on to Part 2 shortly.
I wanted to say thank you for this story. I feel so seen, like you wrote out my thoughts and feelings. That silence. Such a relief.
Also, hot as fuck - probably because of the character development and how much the internal narrative feels like my own - but just... I am a bit short on words. Thank you.
Well, I was going to read this but I was quickly waylaid -- "But his name is Ozymandias." . . . "The smartest kitty on the planet." Excitement lit her eyes. "You know Watchmen!" -- Poor Ramesses, even Shelley couldn't save him from perversion by a comic book.
Amazing! it is rare I fall so deep into a story as I have with this one. Probably my favorite of yours to date.
You have a great style. Excellent writing. Congrats on keeping it interesting as you covered the same ground as the characters moved further into the story. Will she really be OK ? Will he ever cum normally ? Very sensitive, 5 stars.