All Comments on 'Silver Fox Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Gawd damn

HeyjessHeyjessalmost 3 years ago

love love LOVE, this may be my new favorite Sulfur story. I can’t wait for part 2!

DeathMaidenDeathMaidenalmost 3 years ago

In-fucking-credible!!!! As always, your story doesn't disappoint!! It made me cum over and over again!! I can't wait for Part 2!!!

CatCatalmost 3 years ago

Oh, wow..... Never before has pain, real warm, aching pain, felt more desirable!

Thank you so much for yet another classic to my nighttime collection.

EssEssCehEssEssCehalmost 3 years ago

I just love your dark, depraved fairytales so damn much...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I’ve already read this over 3 times & it hasn’t even been up a full day! So hot and incredibly written!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Heady. Another dark, twisted, lovely story. I enjoy what you do so much. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Thank you for writing this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wonderful. I often find longer stories difficult to read and finish but I had a hard time putting this one down at all. I'll be keeping an eye out for the second part when it comes out.

CatsandtatsCatsandtatsalmost 3 years ago

You write what it's like to crave and take pain so beautifully!! It is so sensually done. It feels so real.

As someone with a pain fetish, I also feel so seen and understood when it's not something often accepted.

Your writing is also just so incredibly well done. You are by far my favorite author on here. Thank you for all your hard work!! <3 <3

MasterBlogmanMasterBlogmanalmost 3 years ago

I've just started getting into your stories. Interesting style -- long, slow development with a lot of emphasis on character. I like the way you switch the narrator back and forthj so you can get into both of their heads. You make the reader wait for the erotica, but it's worth the wait. I don't generally cultivate S&M as a genre, but you do it so well that you make me enjoy it. I'll be on to Part 2 shortly.

PollyKettlePollyKettlealmost 3 years ago

I wanted to say thank you for this story. I feel so seen, like you wrote out my thoughts and feelings. That silence. Such a relief.

Also, hot as fuck - probably because of the character development and how much the internal narrative feels like my own - but just... I am a bit short on words. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Well, I was going to read this but I was quickly waylaid -- "But his name is Ozymandias." . . . "The smartest kitty on the planet." Excitement lit her eyes. "You know Watchmen!" -- Poor Ramesses, even Shelley couldn't save him from perversion by a comic book.

Maskedblogger51Maskedblogger51about 1 year ago

Amazing! it is rare I fall so deep into a story as I have with this one. Probably my favorite of yours to date.

Ravey19Ravey19about 1 year ago

A dark twisted love story. Brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

You have a great style. Excellent writing. Congrats on keeping it interesting as you covered the same ground as the characters moved further into the story. Will she really be OK ? Will he ever cum normally ? Very sensitive, 5 stars.

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A cat person with no specific gender preference is nyanbinary. Okay, an update on Payne Hall’s hall of... joy! This is a pending “bad idea” notice. Once a story is approved, it will post, but this one isn’t Sulfur’s and it’s not as long as usual. The title is “Cry Little Sis...

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