by neutrona
A really nice love story that stands alone but could be expanded on if the author wished to.
Well written and holds the readers attentions. I too would like to see more about these two now that they are together. Please give us more.
Yes, there is certainly enough romance between these two for their story to continue, but perhaps 'the next step' should be within the mind of the reader. I loved the way the clothing came off. Very well written with good attention to detail. I thoroughly enjoyed 'watching' as well as 'feeling' the action between the two characters. The scenes were very real and seriously hot. Enough fuel for more than one dream.. Sweet dreams indeed.