by tollbooth
Such a hot sexy story! That sounds so so good !
It seemed like there was a bit of sexual gymnastics going on at one point and from what I could tell there was only one major flaw but even that can be skimmed over and ignored.
“ his penis darting past her cervix.” — no it didn’t, definitely not, it could easily have bumped against it but it not beyond it.
Otherwise, just wow oh and yes please!
Tess (uk)
Sensual and so hot
Vivid fantasy come to life even better with words made me feel like you experienced this last week
Excellent use of descriptive language, solid pacing—well-done!
Your descriptions are amazing! Your writing is addictive. Thank you for sharing.