All Comments on 'Silver Lining'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Vivid and so very sexy

Such a hot sexy story! That sounds so so good !

It seemed like there was a bit of sexual gymnastics going on at one point and from what I could tell there was only one major flaw but even that can be skimmed over and ignored.

“ his penis darting past her cervix.” — no it didn’t, definitely not, it could easily have bumped against it but it not beyond it.

Otherwise, just wow oh and yes please!

Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Agree with Tess

Sensual and so hot

Vivid fantasy come to life even better with words made me feel like you experienced this last week

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Why can’t my “shelter in place” experience be more like hers???

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great writing!

Excellent use of descriptive language, solid pacing—well-done!

VikingboyVikingboyover 3 years ago

Your descriptions are amazing! Your writing is addictive. Thank you for sharing.

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