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All Comments on 'Silvertree Chronicles Bk. 05 Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
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i love this story it is truly good and i am still reading but one thing i have noted it the use of the word genetics in a tecnology free world they would not know of genetics the gods might but the people would not know what is means the beter tearm to use in my opinion would be blood line

Wildwood55Wildwood55about 3 years ago

Re: note (use of term genetics)

There are a LOT of modern words, and idioms use by ES in this series, so using genetics is minor, IMO, but I hear what you are saying. A professional editor could turn this into a best selling series; every time, (so far), I've thought the story line is going to be repetitive, ES comes up with something new.

Where the story is now, it's BOUND to become repetitive, in the remaining chapters... LOL...

GeoD

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