All Comments on 'Simon and Aunt Sophia Ch. 04'

Loved the story. There are a couple of continuity errors. One where you refer to Claire as Sophie. The second has to do with the girls wardrobe, in the restaurant Simon had Claire give up her panties, but upon returning to the apartment, both women remove their dresses and are standing in their bra & panties. Also would have loved to read about dinner. They seem to walk in and be seated, the the next paragraph they walk out. Seamed like a missed opportunity.

I almost fixed the panties thing before submitting but thought she could've gotten them back on the way home but wish I had fixed it now.

Enjoyed the start of this series very much. Hoping for many more.