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ShadowRosiealmost 4 years agoWe are needing some plot and character building to happen. Are there three male characters? In the first paragraph we find Sam, Simon, and older man. Who is "older man"? It doesn't make sense.
You also have some horrible spelling errors. Please find someone to edit your story. Not to change the story but to fix the spelling errors and English grammar errors.
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thameswatcher@thameswatcherOlder grey haired man here, very good at role play so if that floats your boat then get in touch for a little chat.
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