All Comments on 'Simone'

I thought the subject and content was enjoyable, and it had me imagining how I'd feel if I were in your place. I haven't looked at your profile, so I don't know what else you've written and shared-but I will. My feedback is to continue writing and consider consolidating your work more using more paragraphs-solely for readability. I think a less fragmented approach would be easier to read and enjoy. I hope to be able to read more about Simone and her evolution in the future. Great job dear!

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Great story, but the drugs are going to get you and you have great life ahead of you. Be the Girl

It's a great story and very relatable, especially regarding the emotional/romantic aspects. However, I agree with the other poster: lose the drugs. They take away from the emotional edge of the story: he should be getting high on Mike and letting those feelings intensify the hypnos and other training. Other than that, well written and enjoyable.

A really nice love story. I’d say lose the drugs too, but it’s a story and maybe that was part of the process. Good work

As a newly admitted sissy I can so relate to Simone. And I pray I get that lucky.

I need more of these two!

I enjoyed this story. I hope you will write more with less drugs. I am interested in Simone's transition, and getting more gurly with her lunch gal pals. Are there any conflicts to come with Mike and Simone as she becomes more feminine and popular.? I always wondered why caging the penis seemed to be a thing. What you wrote made sense. Me, I was a skinny petite cross country runner, with a stash of my Mother's clothes that I wore every chance I had. I had the biggest crush on a lineman from our football team. I totally would have transitioned for him back in the day. Even though I have since married, and have a family, at our last high school reunion I still had a crush on him, and I found myself flirting with him and acting like a school girl.

I so wanted them to get married . I know they are in love !!!!!!!!!

Not only loving and sexy but it manages to show that even someone that seems to have it all, has life issues just like the rest of us.

Love the writing style you used for this story, and the descriptive progression of Simon to Simone, beautifully done.

I really love the plotline of the whole 'Sissy Romance' story. You don't see that alot where people make the connection "wait sissies are people too, and want to be loved and respected". Mostly it's just that 'sub space', eyes are bigger than your buddy, nothing but degradation and abuse tales that you read. So I LOVE the emphasis on Simone being loved and making herself a better person with a happier life by embracing her inner woman. The only criticism I do have is that the actual narrative is kinda all over the place, train of thought style, with continuity errors all over. But that can be fixed next time by better proof-reading and editing. All in all though- the amazing, very different from the rest, story far outshined any negatives... but I just thought this helpful criticism would help strengthen your future work even more. Great Job! 😘 -Tysvm

Awesome!!!