All Comments on 'Simply His Ch. 31-34'

by CalyPy

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Anonymousover 8 years ago

I have been following this story from the beginning....

and I truly enjoy it! When the chapters were so long in coming, I knew it was from the holidays. I can't wait for more! my only critique would be to say you should really consider getting an editor. Other than that, Keep 'em coming!!! Love it!!!

mcali24 over 8 years ago

I loved these chapters

I love this story!!! And these chapters were amazing I couldn't get enough. I can't wait for what's next!!!!!

loumey1 about 8 years ago

Voting :)

Stopping by to vote here as well as on Watt :) - Good job with the characters! This whole Agape situation could have easily ended up very trite, but it's actually interesting and shows maturity. :)

Anonymousover 7 years ago

You characters have soul

Love your story keep on writing C716

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