All Comments on 'Simply Owned'

Terrific premise.

But lacks details.

Needs many more details of exactly how she plays with and teases his cock. And his balls.

Needs dialog where she asks him whether he's enjoying what she's doing to him. But she needs to be specific about what she's doing/

Needs details of how he was to make her have an orgasm. Needs directions to him about what she specifically wanted him to do. And, frankly, it's not clear at all what that is.

Needs at least some dialog about her other body parts. And whether he likes them. nd what he'd like to do to/with them. And what he'd like to have her do to him with them. Her breasts. Her ass.

Four stars. Could have been five.

This is an amazing story. Please continue.

Very weak attempt at comedy! Would've given it a Zero if I could!