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"What?..." she gasped.
"I'd appreciate if you could wear that forever," Darren pulled her tightly against his chest.
Darren winced in pain, but quickly recovered as Estielle suddenly threw him onto his back, showering him in kisses, tears streaming down her beautiful face.
"Is that a yes?" Darren asked.
Estielle was beyond words, her tongue didn't respond, so she nodded furiously, planting anther hard kiss on Darren's mouth. He sighed, the feeling of her lips was euphoric, but he had to remind himself those were happy tears. It was several minutes of cuddling and kissing, before she finally spat out.
"Yes!"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoThe envelope isn't mysterious. Michael had the ring last--it was what proved Darren's love for Estielle to him. He quietly sent it back to Darren, symbolizing his (unneeded) blessing of the union, and peace between the two men.
Purplefizzover 1 year agoYes, there’s a couple of unanswered questions left there as per the previous comments, origin of the envelope and Estielle’s rapid transition from traumatised victim to lover, but the really big question is why is there an Angel named Vlad? I’m guessing Attila, Genghis and Adolf where all taken…
Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz, 5⭐️
AahhWhattheHellover 2 years agoExcellent as always. I still feel she trusted him a little too soon. I feel she needed a little more "healing time" story wise. she went from the shell shock of rape to sleeping in his bed awfully fricken fast.
Everything from that point on was pure gold however, even platinum.
DeathMaidenover 3 years agoAmazing story of a love that's able to traverse stereotypical boundaries!
Maximillion_Ventresover 3 years agoOutstanding!!! I know you're busy but please tell me a sequel is At least a thought.
Belgiumover 3 years agoI'l really looking forward to more adventures of Lord Asmodeus and his love, his doctor and his cook! So please continue and make it a story arc!
Anonymousover 3 years agoThis story. You have set it up so beautifully to continue. Where does their story go, what about the two other women. The Antagonist was set up so perfectly. Does she ever get redemption or her wings back? 5+ stars.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI have to say, I don't typically get drawn into stories on here, but you drew me in and kept my attention to the end!
Let's see, anger, pain, happiness, sadness, really cold shower and change of pants, furry, terror, and a huge wave of happiness.
What a ride, and I need a another cold shower.
IlliterateScholarover 4 years agoSo, my eyes leaked for the first 60+% of the story, then I enjoyed the short bit of bliss before being assailed by chest-clenching anxiety, and finally got to let that held breath out and relax into bliss again... And none of that would have been possible without amazing characters and artfully crafted plot.
Like I've pointed out in many of my story comments, I am a hopeless romantic, so I could have liked this story no matter who told it. It was so impressively well delivered, though, that I am left in awe and kinda emotionally wrung out (in a good way).
Truly magnificent!
TSreaderover 4 years agoSo well written and an amazing story line. Thank you so much!
TheLastSylphofGaeaover 4 years agoI was enthralled, from the beginning till the end!
The author expertly elicits emotions through his superb literary work: fear; indignation and anger; breathless anticipation; at times, laughter and happiness; and of course, relief and a sense of triumph from righteous justice.
Thank you, Joe!
JayDominicover 5 years agoIt would have been cool if they had children or something, but I’m a sucker for that kind of stuff.
Anonymousover 5 years agoGreat story , man , but it has the potential to be the best. You just need to learn to pace yourself better. Go slow. Read celestial matters. Similar theme, but better put together.
