by ConvictedBeauty
This was nice. I'd be the most interested in the fate of the girls who were caged up with their victim. That sounds fucking hot. Small critique: I find the demons too anthropomorphic with Torture Academy, graduation and stuff. I understand this is more like a joke, but it somehow reduces the terror. Also would have liked more reaction from the teacher seeing the sinful girls horribly tortured. The other girls simply forget about them, which is a bit of a shame. They are all in hell, so Sin could have played a bit more with even the ones belonging to Babel.
I'm not sure if you'll see this reply, but I'm going to revisit alot of the characters as the story goes along. Ive just been so busy the last few months I havent been able to update it