by Grumpy_Bear
It was pretty obvious this was a set-up, but the story was a lot of fun. My only thought is that the flashback does kind of jar, and that maybe it could have been made part of the bedroom scene, so that you could then go back to the main action. Still, that's only my opinion, and I'm sure others loved the sapphic fade-out.
Well written. Hope we see more shananegans soon. Keep up the good work.
Pure fantasy for sure. Either Sandy is fucking someone on the side or she's as dumb as a bag of rocks. Might have been okay with it if Sandy had been with them and encouraging him from the start. That's swapping/sharing or whatever you want to call it. This just makes Ben to be a weak willed guy that will cheat on his wife and then blame it on the other woman. How can she trust him in the future? Come to think of it, she was of cheating on Ben when she was fucking Erica.
This was a tough one. I enjoyed the writing, you write well. I’m not a fan of cheating, and although the wife turned out to be in on it, it just didn’t feel right. The story would have gone better for me if he resisted to the point the wife showed up and let him know she was ok with the game. As I’m not a big fan of sharing, this is still a tough story for me, but consent all around does make it better.