All Comments on 'Single in New York'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Not readable

Stop using "her" and call it a pussy or vagina.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
"Her"

The sex scene was annoying because you cannot say vagina or pussy. Using "her" as a substitute makes the story drag.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Pedestrian

Somewhat hard reading.

SharkBytesSharkBytesabout 3 years ago

The story plot was okay but as has been pointed out "her" just doesn't work. It became annoying and distracting.

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