All Comments on 'Single Male Chaperone'

Your introduction says 23 OTHER women. That makes 24 women and no males.

No time to read with that telltale line. I didn't want to get sucked into a linguistic cesspool

You have a good imagination, but trouble with object and subject pronouns. "As for Heather and I" is an example. "For" is a preposition and requires an object pronoun. "For Heather and me" is correct. You are consistent in making this mistake. An editor would help a lot. Keep posting and I'll keep reading!

It's kind of what I was thinking and then I remembered that it did happen to me..... sure it did... not! Very hot and exhausting with all the different women and nudity. Had a hard time trying to keep up with the names of the different women, but well worth it and a fun read. I'm glad there was the human side that Mark showed to all the women as that made the story so much more than just another fuck story. Well worth the five stars. Thanks

Wonderfully written and a really nice story! I also a appreciate that it was a nicely lengthy story. Thank you for sharing!

A couple of comments regarding grammar. Indeed, you are both right. I am new to publishing and, in my rush to put out a couple of stories, let some very obvious mistakes slip. If it is possible to withdraw and re-publish (and if someone can let me know how to do so) I will. Otherwise, I figure to hopefully learn from these mistakes. I appreciate the feedback.

Absolutely fantastic best decent men's fairytale fantasy. Had everything loved it

Couple of errors in the story but very well done.

Great build up, detail and storyline.

Please continue this story with a at home addition or another

vacation. Heather hooks up with Brie . Heather has Mark give Brie a sensual massage that turns into incest. Tiffany is introduced via her lesbian love

Brie to her father for the special massage with intercourse finally all with

Heather who he marries at his side.

So many directions. Happy writing and thank you👍😀

Wow, he really got out there. What a waste of a premise and my time.

A sexy, well written story

Good story. Didn't check the page length, it was a lot longer than expected

Great story. Loved the ending

Started Out As A Group Of Girls And A Guy! Ended Up As A Close Extended Familial Family! Soo Many Great Things About This~ Getting Used To Nudity, With The Usual Shyness At First, To Gradually Getting Everyone Mostly Accepting Their Bodies! Fun and Comfortable To Read!

I think you're gay

Thought there would have been more sex with some of the girls, especially Tiff, but, hey, it's your story and a great one at that. Pleased Heather and he got together after their return. 5 stars

I like to see chapter 2 with Heather

I loved it! It's funny and it's hot! A fantasy that I would love to be in.