All Comments on 'Single Mom at the Waterpark'

Very hot! I could imagine myself in his role, giving an older woman what she secretly really wanted.

Good first story, recommend more vivid details and explore the characters' emotions more. Good luck.

If there ever was a story that demanded a second chapter, this is it. Great start!

Great story - we need more!

5 Stars

Great milf story. 5-stars.

Good start. Could use a tad bit of refinement and character depth. Overall, good start for your first story.

THANK YOU!!

Nice, and I learned something! I thought that "prerogative" did not have the first r, that it was simply "perogative". Thanks!

I certain want to here more escapades of this MILF

I liked this. I sounded like an inexperienced MILF. Good job!

*It* sounded like an inexperienced MILF.

The pacing was good. I'm glad afterwards she still had to wait for a bit for her kids. Nice little detail that made it feel more plausible. This is a great first story. Hope you take another stab at writing and keep going!

A very enjoyable read, I met a milf at an amusement park years ago, and saw her for a whole, bought back fond memories

Very good first story. Women fully enjoying themselves is something I enjoy reading and you've done that in spades. Currently the best of the eight or so Summer Lovin 2023 stories I've read so far. Do keep writing.

You gotta do a part 2 of this story, it's great. Would love to see him coming over again at her place when the kids are sleeping.

Thank you, everyone, for your kind and encouraging words so far! I was recently out at a waterpark, saw the Summer Lovin contest, and was inspired to submit a couple fantasies I had while I was there. The next one I publish will likely be for a vastly different audience, but stay tuned for more!

Good story, looking forward to a follow up on her!

Bravo!!!! You painted the entire image with your great choice of words. A fine storyteller you are!

Great story, very hot!! 5 stars!