All Comments on 'Sins of Sin City'

It seemed a little rushed in places and the ending was waaayy abrupt. The spelling issues made it difficult to follow sometimes. The premise was really hot though! I suggest getting an editor to help clean it up a bit and finish it. I wanna know what happens!!!

Good luck

While I gave you 4 stars, I think there was a lot missing. I hope there is more to come because if that was the end, it may well be the worst ending ever.