All Comments on 'Siren of the Seas'

by Pimanko

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DessertmanDessertmanover 1 year ago

Again your editing has let you down, too many errors, particularly missing words. Is English not your native language?

DessertmanDessertmanover 1 year ago

I loved it! I too have fallen for an exotic beauty, but thanks to the internet and international telephone service we have built a loving relationship over the past 2 years and plan to marry once international travel is restored.

rodryder44rodryder44about 5 years ago
Siren

What a wimp! I'd like to think he missed a chance to taste what many others had tasted. Story was okay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Polynesia

We were there in 1973 and you didn't mention Huahini a small beautiful island off in the distance with wonderful people

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I have published one book, ghost-written a second, contributed to an anthology, and a number of profession-related articles. All were non-fiction. It is fun to write erotic stories. My hope is that readers enjoy reading my stories as much as I enjoy writing them.