by RabbitPrince
good story u could make it better
i like the part 3 most that was some good shit keep it
keep it coming this is amazing i also agree part three was the best
Really loved the first 3 parts of the story, straight 10/ 10! Though I feel a bit hesitant saying the same of the 4th. Personally I found MC to be overly pathetic here. Yeah I get that it's a large theme of it, but right after the picnic is when I went from delightfully sympathetic to kind of frustrated. 8/ 10.
MC: "What is this 'dignity' you speak of?" ...*smacks* Grow some balls dammit
great story when is part 5 coming? hoping that Marion and tom get closer
If you drink tht much pee U are gonna die by kidny failure, Im piss fetish, I'll nvr drink more than three gulp in a day, only if i get her to fuk. This is discusting, change the story title to Female domination- Piss slave
Maybe Leslee does know what Tom needs. After all,she was probably the leader when the 3 older pissters took advantage of Tom when he was young. But she's an evil twat to treat her baby brother the way she does.
This guy's gonna be a lawyer?! I thought lawyers piss on their clients,not get pissed on!
I felt like such a dirty, shameless, piss slut, and I was loving it!!
Just sums up how I feel about this series!
I really love this idea of the three girls peeing together on their brother. Wish I could find a girl (legal age) or two that would pee on me and let me drink it. da.cd@frontier.com