All Comments on 'Sissy Blackmale Ch. 01'

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Alright first chapter but quotation marks are there to help the reader know when a character is speaking. Parts of your paragraph have actions and then next sentence be a character speaking. It is a bit jarring.

This is exceedingly annoying to read without any quotation marks.

Thanks guys for reading and faving. Part 2 is submitted for publication. I did a little experiment dropping speech marks to see if it would flow better. That failed so thankyou for the criticism and part 2 will be up with full punctuation.

Waiting for next part

i like it

Sat here wearing my rubber maid's uniform, high heeled knee boots whilst resisting the urge to take off my chastity device. Great story