All Comments on 'Sissy Gets Pimped Wife Haves Fun'

Grammar, spelling and a host of other reasons makes this unreadable. There is a non-English section so you can post in your native tongue.

I agree, it is completely unreadable. I could not get through a single paragraph without trying to figure out what was being said. Please do yourself a favor and use an editor next time.

Couldn't read past the first screen. Really needs a good editor to make it readable.

I usually don't comment iwhen I agree with all the other comments but, I might be the only one doing so that's not anonymous. I should have known from the grammar in the title that this was going to be a hard read. Your grammar, spelling and dialogue are all bad. You need an editor or at the very least more practice. Fun topic and idea for a story but when I have to read the first few paragraphs over and over to deduce who's whu and who's talking to who, it's not a good sign.