All Comments on 'Sissy to Military School Pt. 01'

by Tranylvr

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please More!

This is so great I love it. Please continue and don't be afraid of making these long. If anything I think most people would prefer if they were long.

TranylvrTranylvrover 4 years agoAuthor
Like the story?

If you like the story please rate it. If it gets to hot status I'll submit Pt 02.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Definitely need a part 2

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernover 4 years ago
Quite different and interesting

Not what I was expecting, very nice tease. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

xoxo,

Di

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Cool

Very cool story and setup. Digging it so far, nice character description. Can you please add a female character to the the story. Always love a female in a sissy story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very good.

Well written, need a part two.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 4 years ago
very hot start 🔥

Lovely and exciting story .. thank you, please continue .. are there girls at this military school ? Certainly should be 👍 ..

TranylvrTranylvrover 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you for your feedback

I'm putting the final touches on Pt. 03. Thank you for your kind reviews! People have asked if there will be females. I intend for Steffi to explore a wide range of her sexuality and different sexual encounters. Please continue to rate and leave feed back so I can improve.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
One technical point...

Uhh...don't male military schools usually require military HAIRCUTS of all students? Kinda kills the reality angle for me.

TranylvrTranylvrover 4 years agoAuthor
To anonymous - technical point.

I really do appreciate everyone's feedback. It makes me a better writer, and improves my stories! I hear everyone's suggestions. Keep reading, all will be explained in further chapters :) Part 1 is the first day of arrival, not the first official school day :P

Thanks for reading. I appreciate all the feedback.

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