All Comments on 'Sister Agnes in Heaven'

by ElsieThompson

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BiggaluteBiggalutealmost 2 years ago

Wonderful!, First story of yours I've come across and the description of the story really appealed to me, I wasn't disappointed. A fun, sexy, well written story. I look forward to reading your other stories x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Umm. What type of drugs are you taking? You should avoid them, seriously, your head is completely fucked up. 1*

passionateflowerpassionatefloweralmost 2 years ago

I'm not entirely convinced this is true story. I suspect that, at the very least, there's been a bit of exaggeration.

sexymeupsexymeupalmost 2 years ago

dumbest shit I ever read, one star

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Elsie, I just read you story about Saint Peter and the Nun.

It's an interesting concept and idea captured my attention.

While the opening was slow to appreciate, I understood the development taken to build the stories tempo. Female authors have a "lighter" touch in the narrative than a male. Understanding the phasing and underlying meaning is difficult for the typical male reader.

The release of tension in the final paragraphs does fulfill , if not at times painstakingly slow pace, mental picture of satisfaction of this Virgin receiving her heavenly reward. Chase

whacky76whacky76almost 2 years ago

I loved your story, best part was putting Steve Jobs in hell. Interesting concept. You will raise some eyebrows and anger with this story. Keep writing, you have talent.

ElsieThompsonElsieThompsonalmost 2 years agoAuthor

I anticipated negative feedback on this story from prudish Christians. I respond to them by asking why are they on a porn site?

LilithfirstLilithfirstalmost 2 years ago

This story is a hoot. Love the entry to heaven. And a great premise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very well written. Good use of verbiage and clever references in the story. Keep it up and don’t listen to those negative comments from the ignorant among us.

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