by ElsieThompson
Wonderful!, First story of yours I've come across and the description of the story really appealed to me, I wasn't disappointed. A fun, sexy, well written story. I look forward to reading your other stories x
Umm. What type of drugs are you taking? You should avoid them, seriously, your head is completely fucked up. 1*
I'm not entirely convinced this is true story. I suspect that, at the very least, there's been a bit of exaggeration.
Elsie, I just read you story about Saint Peter and the Nun.
It's an interesting concept and idea captured my attention.
While the opening was slow to appreciate, I understood the development taken to build the stories tempo. Female authors have a "lighter" touch in the narrative than a male. Understanding the phasing and underlying meaning is difficult for the typical male reader.
The release of tension in the final paragraphs does fulfill , if not at times painstakingly slow pace, mental picture of satisfaction of this Virgin receiving her heavenly reward. Chase
I loved your story, best part was putting Steve Jobs in hell. Interesting concept. You will raise some eyebrows and anger with this story. Keep writing, you have talent.
I anticipated negative feedback on this story from prudish Christians. I respond to them by asking why are they on a porn site?
Very well written. Good use of verbiage and clever references in the story. Keep it up and don’t listen to those negative comments from the ignorant among us.