All Comments on 'Sister/Genie Ch. 03'

Awesome! I hope there will be more chapters. The really professional writing style gives it so much more appeal!

Much better than the last installment. Easily a 5/5.

Jaya’s temper still is pretty bad, she needs to get a handle on that…

Jaya has a position that required her to read well, understand, memorize and think/reason, ... so why is she all emotional and flighty? She could have used that first weekend to scientifically test and explore her sex genies abilities, and ask all the background question that an historian must ask, ... I think you threw your character a curve ball, ... ;-) TTFN