All Comments on 'Sister/Genie Ch. 06'

3/5

... making magic mistakes that she should have previously discussed with Jenny (the sex genie), they should've had some signals in place, and Jaya would have known if she was pushing the genies limits, ... but the chapter needed some drama, ... a good read, but I was bothered, ... but if you had an editor like me, the story would likely not have gotten written at all, and that would have been a shame, ... ;-) TTFN