by magicz
Bringing Brad into the whole thing and then the guys doing each other ruined the whole story for me.
I Agree, Rancher46. They had 9 holes to share their two cocks with, and I guess we are not into bisexual male activity. The girls can, but I'll pass. I don't mind another guy fucking along side of me or DPing the same woman with me , but that's as far as it goes. Now, back to the story. I thought it could be more descriptive in place; I felt it just kind of droned on. I. Needs something, maybe sharks in the water, or maybe a SIL that shows up making it a sixway. Keep writing.
XYZ
Was going great until Brad turned up. Turned me right off.....sorry. Not for me.