by ms72vt
ms72vt you really know how to tease your readers & keep them hooked. Pleaseeee for god sake & love of your readers get them married with beautiful kids. The suspense is really so painful. And DARE you write a sad ending. I love this tale & you are my most favorite author - Jenny
so are they going to be apart forever? Will Josh find someone else? Or sister Monica, oops Monica wants to experience someone else? I don't think this will happen. But "I hope" in the last line is making me worried. Lovely story, hope they end together.
the teasing and the b/s about prolonging the outcome.why leave the church if she wasn't ready.
Marriage is not a child's play. It's a long term partnership. What Josh doesn't realise is that she is 17 years older than him. Age is just a number, but will his parents approve it & accept her?<p>Assume they get married, she'll be his responsibility, is he ready for a long term vows?<p>If they had kids his responsibility will be doubled. He's so much in love with her that he's not thinking straight<p>Josh is truely, deeply, madly in love with Monica, so is she, but is their love stong enough to survive when they'll be apart from each other?<p> Like others I too want them to get "Married" & live happily ever after<p>Like one commentor pointed out, the "I hope" in the last line is making me nervous.<p>My only humble request to the author is to finish this tale quickly & I think next chapter should be the show down.<p>Please NO SAD ENDING. It'll break my little heart
I like this tale, but you dragging it too much. It's time you finish it off quickly.