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Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 7 years ago
Fantastic

This is really good hope you keep going with these two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Back to to the good old times

Well at least it wasn't rapy like the last few times, too bad we had to wait the whole chapter for them to finally find their way back to how it should have been all along.

4*

thedayafterthedayafteralmost 7 years ago
What the Fuck Happened?

Really got into this story, at least chapters 1 - 4. Started chapter 5 to find that 2 years had passed and Emily was with someone else. No explanation, no background as to why Emily and Joey had separated.

Up until this chapter this was a great story but you copped out by not explaining at the beginning why they separated. It doesn't make sense when, by the end of chapter 4, they were obviously in love with each other.

So what happened?

ThreeHawksThreeHawksalmost 7 years ago
II agree with "Fantastic".

I agree with "Fantastic". This story should go on.

juanviejojuanviejo3 months ago

CINCO ESTRELLAS!

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