by Misterlzr
Really good story, well paced with the right ratio of build up to hot sex. I look for more!
Nice concept, but a spell-check would have been nice. The one most obvious is "climbing" which you spelled on more than one occasion as "climing." I could have posted this as anonymous, so I could blatantly criticize without identification, but I chose to point it out as a member so I could be taken seriously. I enjoyed the story, other than the occasional grammatical and spelling errors. I gave you 5*. Good Luck in the future and delete the anonymous comments.
Really enjoyed that. Would've loved there to be some nice anal as well, but it was good nonetheless. ๐
Lovely story just full of love ๐ it is unfortunate and upsetting that a woman would need to hesitate telling her parents about being pregnant ๐ข
Excellent story! It helps that I have a thing for pregnant women and nursing from them. Totally hot! 5/5