All Comments on 'Sisterโ€™s Secret Pregnancy'

by Misterlzr

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Frankenstein1962Frankenstein1962about 2 months ago

Nicely done. Cheers. Frankie

TheJoker33TheJoker33about 2 months ago

Great story. I do however recommend using a spell check.

jab1971jab1971about 2 months ago

Really good story, well paced with the right ratio of build up to hot sex. I look for more!

muskyboymuskyboyabout 2 months ago

Nice story but some affection from Casey would have added a lot.

OeddieOeddieabout 1 month ago

So hot! Nice work.

amepaculamepaculabout 1 month ago

Nice concept, but a spell-check would have been nice. The one most obvious is "climbing" which you spelled on more than one occasion as "climing." I could have posted this as anonymous, so I could blatantly criticize without identification, but I chose to point it out as a member so I could be taken seriously. I enjoyed the story, other than the occasional grammatical and spelling errors. I gave you 5*. Good Luck in the future and delete the anonymous comments.

james1801james1801about 1 month ago

Really enjoyed that. Would've loved there to be some nice anal as well, but it was good nonetheless. ๐Ÿ‘

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 1 month ago

Lovely story just full of love ๐Ÿ˜˜ it is unfortunate and upsetting that a woman would need to hesitate telling her parents about being pregnant ๐Ÿ˜ข

UncleFester623UncleFester62325 days ago

Excellent story! It helps that I have a thing for pregnant women and nursing from them. Totally hot! 5/5

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Your stop for incest fantasy. Have a story or a fantasy youโ€™d like written out? Drop me a note or a comment, Iโ€™ll write it out for you and credit you with the story. I mostly focus on brother/sister and mother/son fantasy, but may explore more along the way.