All Comments on 'Sister Sarah Ch. 11'

Keep it up man, i would never be a exhibionist personally but if they like it then heck yeah!!!

OKAY, IT'S OFFICAL, THIS STORYLINE HAS BECOME A BACKSTORY TO A FUCK FEST. IF I WERE TO RE-WRITE THIS STORY, I COULD CONDENSE IT DOWN FROM 11 CHAPTERS TO 5 CHAPTERS JUST BY CUTTING THE REPEATED SEX SCENES. REMOVE THE BENDING OVER THE TAILGATE FUCKING, SOME OF THE MORNING, NOON, AND NIGHT BLOW JOBS, THE THREE OR FOUR TIMES A DAY FUCKING. THE POINT IS IT IS GETTING TIRING READING THE SAME THING OVER AND OVER. THE AUTHOR IS LOSING SIGHT OF THE STORYLINE. IF YOU WANT JUST SEX, GO TO PORN HUB. I LIKE A GOOD STORY WITH SOME, REPEAT SOME, GOOD SEX IN IT. THERE IS A REALLY GOOD STORY HERE, BUT THE SEX IS IN THE WAY.

I agree with SAV12 the storyline is getting convoluted by the fuckfest and the exhibitionism. Still enjoy the read but it would be so much better to focus on the lives and struggles of these two. 5 stars