by exfireman
BUT, STILL FILLED WITH TOO MUCH SEX. I LOVE THE STORY AND THE LITTLE TWIST OF LONELINESS WAS A NICE TOUCH. PROBABLY SOMETHING SARAH DIDN'T THINK OF AND COULD CAUSE A BIG PROBLEM IN PARADISE. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE AND SKIM THROUGH THE SEX SCENES.
I liked the story, but downgraded it to a 3/5 at the end.
Why?
Simple, because incest does not share, the love is just too intense.
How do I know?
Been there and done that.
The introduction of a third wheel ruined a good story.
It would just never happen.