All Comments on 'Sister, Sister'

A SEQUEL!!!

Very nice. A couple of little spelling mistakes, ("dinning" room table), but very nice.

I liked your story, but would very much like to see a sequel. You hinted that you might be having some hot sex with your nieces.

Some editing needed, solid stroke material for the Incest crowd. The sailor home from the sea and his nieces could make this pretty damn interesting. So long as it involves consenting adults, you could make this a very good series.

You definately wrote a good 'un there. Boy howdy! Let us know what happens when this happy little family finally gets to move in together, all-right? I'll bet that the nieces are going to be just as hot as his Sister, you betchum Red Ryder. That will be a marvelous scene, I'm already picturing it in my head!

Among the better ones I have read . Let's get it rolling with his nieces ; I can almost taste them .

This story was great (although the number of times the man came without slipping out after softening was a little hard to believe)! ;-)

Please keep writing and make sure that you make a sequel or two about the characters in this story, even if it isn't all of them at once. Heck, add a few for variety if you feel like it! Surely the girls will have boyfriends or girlfriends on the side; maybe the time will come for THEM to discover the family secret!

However you wish to go from here, you wrote a great story and we hope that you will continue it at some point in the future!

Most of the comments have been from men but I wanted to let you know that this story worked for me too. Had me wet and wanting by the time you were through. Can't wait to read about the family life at this particular house. How I wish I were one of them. Keep the story going.

Quite a tale! I hope you write a sequel to it at some point. I'd love to see the story include the nieces.

I love consenting restraint like this. It had me breathing hard imeadiatly. Didnt like the Grandma though, that put me off. Not that it stopped me reading. Tying her hands was a brilliant writers device. Great story, THANK YOU

Bro/sis incest tales are usually the best of that category and you did this one well so far.

Wonderful writing that kept me engaged and excited. It seems pretty clear that this is the first chapter in a series. I can't wait to read about Cherry's daughters getting an education. (The brother's nieces).

I mean besides the good story, do you have to keep on mentioning granny nearly every paragraph or more?

I enjoyed this greatly, the fact that they finally got what they grew up wanting is a good conclusion. Didn't see pussy eating granny coming but once it did the daughters had to. Good story :)

Boring

If anything is boring asshole of Lit it's you annony comments!

Excellent story. Thanks

Excellent 5 stars

Very good writing, TxRad — please keep up the good work.