All Comments on 'Sister, Sister Ch. 02'

Please tell me you've started this up as a continuing series, afterall there's nieces to be trained.

A tasty story that will be so much better with her daughters involved .

Except for the 100, which I feel you so richly deserved, I think I agree with the Frenchman from Scotland (IS THAT EVER A CONTRADICTION IN TERMS?). I will also be looking forward to the involvement of her daughters. There are a lot of places you can take this tale. I trust that you will select the right ones. Thanks for your work.

More please. Great story, I loved reading it. Please write at least one more part to this story as it deserves to have a proper ending.

i loved the leading upto the end but it was to SHARP to the end. dont just fuck her! have her eat you fully. then lean into it slowly teasing her the hole way there. other then that the "sex" part like

"Cherry whimpered softly and then yelled as he buried his tongue in her sex"

coud use a little work. but other then that i loved it. i agree with the others you need to wright one or six more and add the darthers.

great work keep them cuming all night long

You should continue the story, but add in the daughters to. this story is to good to end this way.

Always amused to see others telling an author how to write his or her stories. It's like telling another what crust he should like on his pizza or what her favorite color ought to be. If someone wants a different story, then he should write it himself, or at least offer to pay to have it written his way.

Thanks for your great story and for your attention to grammar, diction, spelling and punctuation; it's nice not to have to interrupt the narrative's flow to try to figure out what the writer was trying to say. I enjoyed your characterizations, the scenarios and the dialogue -- realistic, warm, fun and sexy. It's a sign of success when you leave your audience wanting more. Nicely done.

will the daughter/s arrive seperately or together? Soon I hope?

Any chance for this continue? Please more.

More please... I feel so Oliver Twisty...

I hope there is more to come involving the daughters as well.... so damn hot

Please you have to continue we haven't heard about the Daughters yet

This storyline is one of the best I've ever read.

Please tell us about the bed and the room with the column.

The daughters visiting the house might add some nice twists.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Being an only child I can only fantasize about sibling romance/sex but this story does a lot for my fantasies. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing.

wow Hot I couldn't stop reading

The plot is grate & it

has so many ways it can go.

please write on this story

I also agree with a comment from another reader! lets have the daughters visiting for their spankings! bet their even naughtier girls than their mother? they should also turn the "table" on him! pun intended!

Definitely needs further adventures, especially with the daughters.

Please keep writing this story. Superb.

Please continue this story. Loved it so far and really want to hear more :)

Please give us more!!!

This is a great story, but after a gap of over 6 years, you're not going to add to it, are you ?

tree lined (tree-lined)

Grandmothers (grandmother’s)

Grandmother (grandmother)

bare handed spanking and possible even a few licks

inner crotch (IS THERE AN OUTER CROTCH???? IF THERE IS WHICH WOULD YOU SMELL????)

was to crazy (too)

youngest but Sherry the oldest (younger) (older)

spread eagled (spreadeagled)

sat the glasses (set) (3)

dinning table (dining)

her lay there (lie)

mind blowing (mind-blowing)

have my desert (dessert)

sometime (some time)

drawn out (drawn-out)

taught body (taut)

wide open (wide-open)

The two daughters moved in, but since this was posted seven years ago I doubt it will even happen....

As you have posted as recently as 11/23/17 it is clear you are still writing, so holding out hope for the promised addition of Cherry's daughters.

Keep on writing,

Tanhors and family.

Waiting for the daughters too.

You have so many unfinished stories, why do you do it ?

It's just so annoying.

Rapier

That cries out to be continued or at least properly ended...

It's past time to continue this story, maybe adding Cherry's daughters. I'll be looking forward to see Sister, Sister Chapter 3

I gave you 5 stars, keep up the good work

Pretty tame after the first chapter. Where are the daughters, the grandma stories, and the video?

Oh boy!

Definitely needs more, that was so good. Chapter 3, 4 and 5 please. It would take at least that long to go through the family and make them all his sex slaves and lovers.

5/5

I disagree. Turning it into a total harem story just wrecks a good I/T steamer. Don't fan to the entire zip code.