All Comments on 'Sister Starts My Harem Ch. 05'

I love this series and hope you print the next one a lot sooner. The cliffhanger sure is killing me but so is the five-time relationship building here that is filled with love before lust and fun before kinky.

Great chapter. Enjoying this series very much.

Cheers

SAGE

Just wanted to drop a vote of confidence for you as this is your first story here. Keep up the good work and brings us some babies ;-)

Alright so, bear with me here...

I feel like I've read this before, and I don't mean recently. Is this a repost? Is this being copied from elsewhere? Did I read another one similar to this but not quite? Chapter 1 of this was October of 2020, and I guess I could have read the first chapter or 2 back then, but I really don't feel it was that recent? I'm also not sure if I was reading on Lit at that time, as I don't think I was in the reading mood for 2020 (comes in phases where I get off to lit, then pics/videos, then non spicy stuff. Not necessarily in that order.) Either way, I NEED to read more. I feel like parents are having a rough time, dad possibly cheating on mom, mom cheating on dad w/ Andorra, possibly wants to join in the fun with kids? Is that how this goes next? Because if yes, hot. Cheating is a big no-no for me (personal experience), but still down for it if that's the way the story goes. Now write more! Gimme that good good!

Great story. More. Thanks.

Loving this series... I hope his harem continues to grow and I hope he builds up his stamina...lol. great characters and storyline so far. Would love to see him tap into his confidence and Dominance over his ladies...makes avenues for others as they see him grow. Great stuff, keep em coming.

Just a quick thing,unless it's a twist during the deep throat some. Don't have adams apples.

Keep them coming. They are so good.

Great read,just spoiled with the cliff hanger

Please! More. More

YES, bring in the Mom!

Have her an even bigger submissive than Jeannie, and entirely devoted to Jack too!

Make Annie a mommy-slut

God I love this series. Keep up the great work. Thank you!

Love the series a ton, and I can't wait for the next part, so I hope you don't keep us waiting too long! Already love all the characters and I can feel that you have some kind of plan for the future, so that gives me hope that we'll see a new chapter soon. Bookmarked and followed!

We need the story to continue!

Dear Writer!

So far, this is a well-structured story. Erotica is very hot, pornography is slowly and well dosed. Please be careful, you have alredy a lot of a character! Yes, I see the title of the story, but "less is more." I think there’s plenty more potential in the existing characters:

Lesbian awakening in the twins, Rocky’s sexual education, Jeanne, Taylor and Jack’s love triangle. A range of options for upgrade existing characters.

Don't be greedy, as Jack isn't like that.

This is a good story about horny young people, I would leave them.

pleas wright more

i think this is the best series i have read so far. please continue.

I must agree with the previous comments be careful in which direction your going with the next few chapter because they will determine if this with be an epic hall of fame story or a disappointment. I myself feel that he already his harem with the four and you could add Rocky and her virginity as well and possibly his mom because of his earlier fantasy he had with her and that it. You have a great storyline here and I can see possibly where your going with it, but don’t please don’t, overdo it...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Bit of a rocky start and while you've been improving don't be afraid to ask for an editor

Jack seems like a little bitch. I don’t want to fuck I want a nap. “I’m worn out from hours ago”. No way he is a young fit serviceman.

Jack seems a good guy and I'm rooting for him. But as one guy here said, he's a little bitch. Can't get it up? Honestly, he hasn't had sex much at all. Sometimes I'm annoyed when the story shows the guy having 7 orgasms in a day. Thats a bit much. But in this story, he tapped out at 1. At one! One in the morning and couldn't get it up again until the twins lezzed out in the evening. You cant have a happy harem if you tap out at 1. Pathetic.

Next instalment please!

Enjoying this so far and am looking forward to reading more.... Please keep up the good work.

And yes your writing has definitely improved from the 1st chapter :)

Many thanks for sharing with us.

Thank you for your time in writing this highly enjoyable storyline

I look forward to seeing more of your chapters you left us with a nice cliffhanger.

please continue with your efforts you have improved from the 1st chapter

Writing was good, need more!!

Hope you continue this story it is very enjoyable. I am sure your busy but the story is a good one and would love to see the more of it.

I hope you get a chance to continue this story, great job.

Would love to see another few chapters hope all is well it's been a few months

Would love to read more.

Been awhile since you've written here. Hope everything is ok with you. Would love to read more, I agree with some of the others that say they don't like the cheating, so they don't want mom involved... But their are ways around that. open marriage, as dad is away often, they are open to others while apart, Andorra can be a lezzie love of mom's and is her most common lover, but she misses cock every now and then. their should be past incest maybe mom and gramps after his wife past. So mom is ok with the incest already going on. Twins should introduce the others to their new relationship, with taking their oil up they do to the next level, since everyone loves watching and also want to see then go there anyway. Just some thoughts to help if you have a case of writer's block. I look forward to seeing where you take this story it has so much potential. thanks for sharing.

Great story so far. Wonderful improvement since the start.

I just need to know, now that I know Annie's name, how you would you say Jeannie's name?

Jean-ies, with JEAN as main word, or Je-annies with ANNIES as the main word spoken like in French with the soft Je.

I was saying the name in my mind as the first one, but when Annie's name appeared, I thought she was named after her mother. Which one did the author mean?

This has been a fun story to follow and I hope it continues. I can see an installment about the snorkeling and possibly another circle meeting. Doe Jack have two overlapping, loving triads or a sexy polyamory/harem thing with shifting partners? Does the twin's company assist Jack with more stamina? Besides Rocky, how many on the compound end up involved over time? Another installment might be if Mom/Annie relays a story of her past with Gramps and/or her relationship with Andorra when she meets with Jack and Jeannie. Does she want to join them or is she just going to give tips on discretion? There is plenty for multiple stories or even more series. Thank you StuartLaJoie and have fun!

When will there be more to the story

Looking forward to more thanks

More please! Great writting.

I hope you continue this story.

Best writing I've read in a long time. Great story - hotter-n-hell - read all 5 installments all at once, and now I can't wait for #6! Thank you, Stuart, and I hope for more soon.

This is good I want more! Great job author. Can't wait for more

Hope there is more coming soon - awesome!

please tell me there is going to be a part 6

Really getting better, LOVE it. AAAAA+++++

Yes, yes, yes...knew this was coming on, in some form and fashion...Annie is very observant and knowledgable...why would she not have seen any of this.

And, she is obviously not TOO upset with what is going on...she puts off the meeting until the group gets back...SHE IS GOIMG TO JOIN, just wait & see...

Love this storyline...looking forward to how more of this is exposed!!

Excellent series. Still a 5 star.